sorry to say, but i think you have to improve and learn english harder more from now on.. to be a good fashion stylish or other.. and about your editing thing, your cropin' for those photos so bad, you need to clean and with a bigggg carefull touching. hope u can take my advice, but if u think i am wrong you can tell me for sure. WL, Vorega
tara..pardon me..i've saw your blog and i guess your just forcing yourself to much to look stylish..but the fact is..nope. It's not a "wanna bee's",dear.. You need to practice more in it. Not to look "stylish", but to look "safe" first. Don't wear a shirt with many absurd words,for exam.And you need to buy a proper and worthy shoes for sure. It'll usefull to complete your better look. I hope you understand,friend..
i think they are both right friend.But we will assure you that we are here to help you.=) Don't hesitate to ask us if you need help or advise..=) Looking forward on your next post,have a great day ahead.=)
vorega: gw seneng bgt bisa dapet advice kayak lu, thanx ya , gw tau kok emang gw masih kurang dalam segala hal di blog ini, thx sekali lagi gw terima advice lu dengan senang hati....:)
ringa: sama dengan vorega tadi, thx ya udah kasih comment di blog gw, gw juga tahu di blog ini emang masih kurang dalam segala hal, tapi next time gw akan mencoba untuk lebih baik...tunggu ya :)
i agree with Ringa Dinga Boing Boing . i may not be a very good or remarkable fashion stylish here, but am wroking on it :) and one thing that you should take note : Being stylish doesn't mean being somebody else . Don't force yourself too much . nevertheless, like what everybody has said here, we r ready to help you should you need advises or comments :D
Hey there :) Can't help myself from sharing some thoughts. In the case of being stylish I think the wise thing to do is to give a peek on magazines. No I'm not trying to sell out my magz though :) but in case you're interested it's going to be out at the end of June. Heehee. Well, magazine is a good source of inspiration because you can pick things up safely since all the editorials have been approved by the people in the fashion industry. For us, the ones that live in the fashion industry, being stylish is not 100% due to nature. But practice and a lot of knowledge chip in too. And don't get fooled by people who claimed that they have superb fashion sense because sometimes we don't tell them that they're our daily jokes. Then you can take the next step, pour your heart and soul to your clothes.
PS. It's actually 'wannabe'. Sorry, again I can't help myself. So sorry. PPS. Oh and the job is called stylist. Stylish is an adjective. Sorry sorry sorry. I just want to say that I think you might want to fix your grammar first before you can start correcting others. PPPS. I can give you some tips like I put in my editorials. Like some?
oh yes lily, too enjoyed typing that I did not even notice that . And anyway, it's NOT at the end of June, but in the end of June. Not only me, you also need to learn more before correcting each other"
But... Aduh maaf ya untuk jadi orang ngeselin Tapi untuk tanggalan, yang benar paiai "at", seperti : at the end of june "In the end" memang betul, tapi kalau diterjemahkan jadi "pada akhirnya" Pemakaiannya beda
Again, maaf ya Bukan bermaksud jadi grammar police Sorry sorry sorry sorry sejuta kali
anyway, yes I agree with Lilylove.. sometimes my fingers do itch if I see silly grammatical errors..I feel like correcting them right away. LOL. However, I also agree with Vorega and Ringa. you need to make some improvements on your use of English language. Or, just use Indonesian language if it is your first language. we're mostly Indonesian, anyway...
And another thing,, don't force yourself to be a stylish person.. read magazines and I'm sure you'll find many tips there.. I am not a stylist, myself.. but I keep reading fashion magazines and blogs so that I know more about the fashion industry. ummm... and yeah.. If you have any doubt on what you are going to wear, just post your choices of looks and we are here to help you!
stop typing "pant" and "short", dearest. there are "pants" and "shorts" :) learning photoshop may help you. I'd love to see your next posts because there is lack of male fashion blogger. keep on your track! keep shining, keep smiling.
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sorry to say, but i think you have to improve and learn english harder more from now on.. to be a good fashion stylish or other.. and about your editing thing, your cropin' for those photos so bad, you need to clean and with a bigggg carefull touching. hope u can take my advice, but if u think i am wrong you can tell me for sure.
WL, Vorega
tara..pardon me..i've saw your blog and i guess your just forcing yourself to much to look stylish..but the fact is..nope.
It's not a "wanna bee's",dear..
You need to practice more in it.
Not to look "stylish", but to look "safe" first.
Don't wear a shirt with many absurd words,for exam.And you need to buy a proper and worthy shoes for sure. It'll usefull to complete your better look.
I hope you understand,friend..
Ouw..and improve your english please..
Thank you :)
i think they are both right friend.But we will assure you that we are here to help you.=) Don't hesitate to ask us if you need help or advise..=) Looking forward on your next post,have a great day ahead.=)
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The Brown Mestizo
We're with you friend.Just try to improve more on your English grammar,but we will support you friend.Looking forward on your next post.=)
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vorega: gw seneng bgt bisa dapet advice kayak lu, thanx ya , gw tau kok emang gw masih kurang dalam segala hal di blog ini, thx sekali lagi gw terima advice lu dengan senang hati....:)
ringa: sama dengan vorega tadi, thx ya udah kasih comment di blog gw, gw juga tahu di blog ini emang masih kurang dalam segala hal, tapi next time gw akan mencoba untuk lebih baik...tunggu ya :)
summer and solo: thx for u'r support...
i agree with Ringa Dinga Boing Boing .
i may not be a very good or remarkable fashion stylish here, but am wroking on it :)
and one thing that you should take note : Being stylish doesn't mean being somebody else . Don't force yourself too much .
nevertheless, like what everybody has said here, we r ready to help you should you need advises or comments :D
Hey there :)
Can't help myself from sharing some thoughts.
In the case of being stylish I think the wise thing to do is to give a peek on magazines.
No I'm not trying to sell out my magz though :) but in case you're interested it's going to be out at the end of June. Heehee. Well, magazine is a good source of inspiration because you can pick things up safely since all the editorials have been approved by the people in the fashion industry.
For us, the ones that live in the fashion industry, being stylish is not 100% due to nature. But practice and a lot of knowledge chip in too. And don't get fooled by people who claimed that they have superb fashion sense because sometimes we don't tell them that they're our daily jokes.
Then you can take the next step, pour your heart and soul to your clothes.
PS. It's actually 'wannabe'. Sorry, again I can't help myself. So sorry.
PPS. Oh and the job is called stylist. Stylish is an adjective. Sorry sorry sorry. I just want to say that I think you might want to fix your grammar first before you can start correcting others.
PPPS. I can give you some tips like I put in my editorials. Like some?
Have a good day :)
@ lilylove: ouwh thanks lilylove for your correction.
Just a little bit mistaken.
oh yes lily, too enjoyed typing that I did not even notice that . And anyway, it's NOT at the end of June, but in the end of June. Not only me, you also need to learn more before correcting each other"
toodles!
TARA : maaf ya ganggu blognya :(
But...
Aduh maaf ya untuk jadi orang ngeselin
Tapi untuk tanggalan, yang benar paiai "at", seperti : at the end of june
"In the end" memang betul, tapi kalau diterjemahkan jadi "pada akhirnya"
Pemakaiannya beda
Again, maaf ya
Bukan bermaksud jadi grammar police
Sorry sorry sorry sorry sejuta kali
hahaha kocak abiss..
anyway, yes I agree with Lilylove.. sometimes my fingers do itch if I see silly grammatical errors..I feel like correcting them right away. LOL.
However, I also agree with Vorega and Ringa. you need to make some improvements on your use of English language. Or, just use Indonesian language if it is your first language. we're mostly Indonesian, anyway...
And another thing,, don't force yourself to be a stylish person.. read magazines and I'm sure you'll find many tips there.. I am not a stylist, myself.. but I keep reading fashion magazines and blogs so that I know more about the fashion industry.
ummm... and yeah.. If you have any doubt on what you are going to wear, just post your choices of looks and we are here to help you!
love,
Janice
stop typing "pant" and "short", dearest. there are "pants" and "shorts" :)
learning photoshop may help you. I'd love to see your next posts because there is lack of male fashion blogger.
keep on your track!
keep shining, keep smiling.
xoxo,
F
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